More help with German Translation for Artwork?

[WWGeezer]

Once again, seeking some help for english to german translation for The Blue Max Project Artwork ( the last time I tried using Google Translator and Volker Nemsch commented that Bruno Stachel would have to been sent back to the trenches based on the first translation)

In this case I am trying to create "faux newspaper" clippings

The first is an obituary for Willie von Kluggerman ( as well as publicity shot for Bruno who is on the rise). The newspaper got it all wrong by the way, Bruno actually cut Willi off and forced him into a factory tower, killing him.

"Leutnant Wilhelm von Klugermann

Beauvin, 14, May.

On May 12th Leutnant von Klugermann was killed in an air battle over Cambrai. His close friend, Leutnant Bruno Stachel was at his side during the battle. Stachel, one of the best fighter pilots in Jasta77, was able to shoot down three English aircraft, but it was not enough to save Wilhelm. He will be greatly missed by friends and family."

The second is after Bruno saves Richthofen's life in a chance meeting in the sky, he comes to visit Jasta 77. At this point in the story the Hauptmann Heidemann is trying to promote Bruno's fame, so not too far reaching that he would have leaked the story to the press

"Local Pilot Saves Rittmeister von Richthofen

Beauvin, 15, April.

Rittmeister von Richtofen made a visit to Jasta 77 this week to thank Leutnant Bruno Stachel for saving his life. Young Leutnant Bruno Stachel spotted three Bristol Fighters stalking von Richthofen. He was able to shoot down two of them, giving von Richthofen time to recover.
“This young man has a great future with the Deutsche Luftstreitkräfte,“ said Richthofen, “ I wish he was flying with JG-1.”

Richthofen poses with Jasta 77"

The image attached is the WIP for the newspaper clippings, with my Google Translator version of the text ( I apologize in advance to Volker). The one about Richthofen's death is authentic and came from the archive of Berliner Boersenzeitung, I just added the grave photo and caption. Also include a "faux photograph" of the crash scene site, the background is a screen shot from the flight sim Rise of Flight, I added the image of pilot in the foreground

[WWGeezer]

and in case it you want it attached .txt files with both the english and bad google german